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[puzzle] Dense page and ties

Posted: 26 Jan 2021, 13:19
by OCTO
Both staves are in the bass clef. I have problem here in LH and the upper tie.
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Re: [puzzle] Dense page and ties

Posted: 28 Jan 2021, 14:05
by OCTO
Another headache:
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Re: [puzzle] Dense page and ties

Posted: 28 Jan 2021, 15:06
by tisimst
Honestly, what you've done is pretty clear to me. I'd only do some (optional) tiny tweaks to fill a bit more whitespace than looks right to me:
  • first image, RH, top tie: move the right end a little closer to the flat
  • second image, both bottom ties: move right ends a little closer to the stem, just a little
Again, those are super nit-picks, but that would make this just a little bit better to my eyes.

I guess you could do something like this:
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Re: [puzzle] Dense page and ties

Posted: 29 Jan 2021, 08:45
by OCTO
tisimst wrote:
28 Jan 2021, 15:06
Honestly, what you've done is pretty clear to me. I'd only do some (optional) tiny tweaks to fill a bit more whitespace than looks right to me:
  • first image, RH, top tie: move the right end a little closer to the flat
  • second image, both bottom ties: move right ends a little closer to the stem, just a little
Again, those are super nit-picks, but that would make this just a little bit better to my eyes.

I guess you could do something like this:

tie-puzzle-possible-solution.png
Thank you very much tisimst, indeed a beautiful solution!